And thank you, meimei42, for the opportunity.I was gonna post in each story, but, I'm lazy, so I'll do one big post for everyone for my comments.The first story was The Monster in the Closet.First off, who doesn't love the wee!chesters? SRSLY? I liked that the author explored the bit about the .45 and this quote really rang true to the story; Did you see a monster in the closet, too, when you were my age, Dean?Maybe that's why Dean already has a gun under his pillow.I only wish it had been longer.The second story, Throw You to the Wind (You Fly Away) was total death fic. I am not fond of death fic, but it was a solid representation. Mary's BoysAww, Mary!POV. We loves us not just the Winchester sons but the whole clan, living, dead and if there are any absent, probably would love those too.Then there's Black and WhiteRecap and speculation from Dean's POV. You totally needed to take this further! You fulfilled the challenge of black and white, but Dean's character is so rich with the whole white hat black hat thing... More would have been good.The Clocks are TickingI did that. I got a lot of little pokes in there, too. It was awesome fun, though in retrospect I wish I had begun it differently, or done more with Sam. He had far too easy a time of it, but I was worried about length and. Anyway.Target Practice... That was a clever way to work 99 bottles into a story. A poignant purpose to it, as well. All I could have asked for was that Sam be there to have his own theories about Dean's behaviors. The little poem-y thing at the end? And if one of those bottles doesn’t take a fall,Then you won’t have a brother, won’t have one at all. That rocked.Untitled was deep sadness, logical sadness. As I said before I'm not big on deathfic. Sam's reactions to it were interesting, though. And Dean's use of the car as a way of otherworldly communication totally made sense. Despite the plotholishness of Dean being around after he dies despite the bargain, this story won me with the mention of the tailypo.I haven't heard that story in SO LONG!!!! It scared the hell out of me when I was little. That was awesome.Hey, author of Hide in the Shadows, Step into the Light OMG, get out of my brain or something! *L* I felt an eerie confusion when I was reading the beginning of your fic because I was like, this is familiar. Yike? Mine started the same way, and with the same problem for Sam.Your problem, of course was hugely different, and your solution as well. Yours played into the greater arc of this season's story, mine was a chunk of time that could be inserted wherever, for the most part. I dug it. It was my kind of tale (obviously *G*).The best, IMO, really did come last. If you have never written fan fic, what have you been writing? Because you obviously don't just sit on your hands, there, buck-o. I loved Everything Tastes Like Chicken like, totally. It fit my favored formula, had the Impala, and a creepy reminder of the Hills Have Eyes with the old guy and then you fall seamlessly into legend. And. Can I say cleverly subtle with the eww factor? I gush with yay, and of course felt like in comparison my story seemed crafted with Crayola.
Title:Come Around AgainAuthor:grrliCharacters:Dean, Sam, guiltRating:pg litePrompt: Sam and Dean get into a vicious fight (physical or verbal) and one walks out on the other.Summary: *points to prompt* It's a moment in time, part of the long series of moments in the lives of these afflicted characters.Spoilers: Yes. There is a tiny mention of the origins of Sam's unusual qualities as per the end of season 2.Warnings: Brush your teeth, especially if you drink soda pop often.Disclaimer: I do not own Sam and Dean Winchester, nor their likenesses Jared Padalecki and Jensen Ackles. That would be slavery, and that is supposed to be illegal and stuff.( Come Around AgainCollapse )
Title:Between Here and There - AngelsAuthor:Characters: Dean, Sam, Layla from "Faith"Word Count: Oi, I didn't but it's more than a hundred. *S*Rating: PG litePrompt: FaithSummary: Some people really can survive on faith alone.Spoilers: if you haven't watched Season One's Faith... what are you doing reading this fan fic? Warnings: Don't go out without changing your underwear. You never know what could happen.Disclaimer: Someone else owns the imaginary subjects of this story. I just snuck up, borrowed them, and put them back just like I found them. I hope. ( I hope it's okay that I've used something I wrote randomly before hand because... it kind of fits this prompt well...Collapse )
okie dokie dears, here you go...it hasnt been betaed so its quite possible its filled with errors, sorry! anyways, let me know if you love it, or hate it...lolCharacters: Dean/Samits Pg I reckon...Disclaimer:I own nothing, this is just a story, okie dokie?
Pairing/Character: Dean, SamRating: PG-13</a></a>superficfridays Prompt #1: No pain, no gainSummary: Sam goes to save Dean from a demon that has hurt them bothSpoilers: comes aftyer end of season 2 at some point, assumes you know about Deals dealDisclaimer: I do not own Supernatural. I so wish I did, lol</b>
So, let me first of all say I have never ever let anypne read my stories before. Im not sure why, but I feel protective of my stories….and its not because I think Im awesome or anything…I don’t know why…anyways, I thought Id let you guys read this and you can tell me if I suck or not!
Title: SnakebiteAuthor: meimei42Pairing/Character: Dean, implied Dean/OFC, SamWord Count: 1720Rating: PG-13superficfridays Prompt #1: No pain, no gainSummary: a snakebite sends Dean to the hospitalSpoilers: noneWarnings: the f-wordDisclaimer: I do not own Supernatural. No money was made.Author’s note: Betaed by Jess (starxd_sparrow) who rocks so much. This was written for the Superficfridays prompt on Livejournal. Any mistakes are mine. How you enjoy. Reviews are love( Prompt 1: No pain, no gainCollapse )
Title: No Pain, No Gain
Pairing/Character: Dean Winchester, Ugly Demon
Word Count: 243
Prompt: No pain, no gain. From superficfridays
Summary: Rescuing Sammy, bloodying up his clothes, fighting a Demon from Hell; just another day at the office for Dean.
Disclaimer: Not mine- none, I swear!
A.N: I know it's only Sunday and it's quite an early post but the idea kinda jumped me. It's short… it's not sweet but enjoy!
Oh and note to mod, I wasn't sure what tags to use so I didn't add any, so it's up to you! :D Oh, second note, if it's too soon to post then delete, away.
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So membership is still (very) small, but since today is Friday and there are a couple of people who have been so kind to join, I thought I would start us off with our first prompt (yay!). Remember you can feel free to post a fic as long or as short as you want and you can post as soon as you've finished writing it just include the prompt # in your header. Prompt #1: no pain, no gainGo and have fun!
Hi and welcome to Superficfridays! This will be a Supernatural fan fiction community in which every Friday a prompt will be given out for all you fantastic fan fiction writer to respond to. If we get big enough, maybe we can even hold some competitions and stuff like that!Now this is my first community, so I hope you guys will bare with me. Check out the Userinfo page for rules and all that jazz. Thank you for joining and I look forward to reading your stories!Dani